What do you think of my story idea?

I had a lot of different ideas that I threw together. Tell me what you think? This is just a *very* basic outline so far. By the way, this all takes place in a futuristic society(obviously).

A civilization has been created on the moon. Everyone lives in these pod-like structues(Like this: http://s738.photobucket.com/albums/xx30/livingextinct/?action=view&current=28377_1_468.jpg – I will be describing all this in my actual story). Most of the energy is generated from solar power. The architectural designer of this society is the grandfather of the main character(Echo). The grandfather eventually returns to Earth for retirement. Echo’s father owns a small bakery in the little civilization. What Echo does not know, is what lies beneath the bakery- a secret organization for the protection of the moon. Echo’s mother and twin sister are a part of it(reasons why Echo is forbidden to know about it will be explained in the story). Back on Earth, terrorist groups from many different countries have come together and are planning to destroy the lunar society. Fauna is called to go to Earth and get inside of the organization and find out their planning. Finding out about her departure, Echo decides to journey to Earth as well and spend time with her Grandfather. Echo knows nothing of Earth’s customs or animals or way of life, and she is curious and eager to learn. However, being on Earth with her identical twin sister gets her into a lot of trouble. Many people after Fauna have mistaken her, and hunt her down. Echo eventually gets caught by a young operative-in-training: Wolf(he goes by his last name). After convincing him that she’s not Fauna, she discovers the tragedy her family has caused many people and her sister’s plan to drop bombs on the world’s major cities. Together, they must find Fauna and blah, blah, blah. They have another problem though. As this is a futuristic society, the recreation of extinct species is present. DNA has been tampered with, allowing a variety of species to survive in Earth’s current conditions- including Wolf’s pet dinosaur(newborn). Some species, such as the terrydactyl, have escaped human control and are considered large birds of prey and are a threat to the human species.

I haven’t quite decided upon the ending yet…What do you guys think?

If someone sees the moon of the future differently, then their own personal opinion will clash with the design of your future and they will slam the book shut

Think about it, the moon has an incredibly low gravitational field, its far more likley that it will be used to construct Space faring travel vessels to be launched into the far reaches of space instead of just… Well, no use in trying. The idea for pet dinosaurs is not interesting at all to me what so ever.

After you were through describing half of the plot I lost interest, I am sorry but

~~~Echo eventually gets caught by a young operative-in-training: Wolf(he goes by his last name). After convincing him that she’s not Fauna, she discovers the tragedy her family has caused many people and her sister’s plan to drop bombs on the world’s major cities. Together, they must find Fauna and blah, blah, blah. They have another problem though. As this is a futuristic society, the recreation of extinct species is present. DNA has been tampered with, allowing a variety of species to survive in Earth’s current conditions- including Wolf’s pet dinosaur(newborn). Some species, such as the terrydactyl, have escaped human control and are considered large birds of prey and are a threat to the human species.~~~

This stuff Has got to go. It is not interesting and the idea of dinosaurs as pets is, beyond immorally secure…